Serial Miniature for piano 2 – revision

I can’t decide. I’m not particularly happy with the tremolando and 3-part counterpoint sections. I have revised them slightly.

I have used the twelve-tone matrix from the tone row and transposed the D# and F#  tremolando, through P0-P6.

I have also used the I0 row to articulate the tremolando at the end of the tremolando section.

In the end section I have taken the notes that accompany the two elements that are in counterpoint and then cycled though the transpositions of them using P0 to P12.

I’m not yet sure whether I prefer this version or the first one…

Here’s the music. Feel free to print it and play it through and let me know what you think. 🙂

Serial Miniature 2 (b) – Full Score 2